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OVERVIEW: The way to well-written science

How to do the Course

 

PART I: Paragraphs and Sentences

SET A: Paragraphs: The Maps Behind Them

SET B: Paragraphs: Using Maps to Meet Readers' Expectations

SET C: Paragraph Coherence and Cohesion

SET D: Sentences

SET E: Scientific Sections (including Methods)

SET F: Scientific Sections: The Discussion

SET G : Scientific Sections: The Introduction

SET H : The Paper as a Whole


Hopefully your Analysis map looked like this:

VitaChaff model answer

 

The hidden assumption was 'wheat germ is good for you'.  Looking for key words that only appear once in the other boxes helps us to see this: 'good for you' is in the position but not in the main claim, and 'wheat germ' is in the main claim but not in the position.

This isn't right:

Wrong way to map vita chaff

It isn't right because it doesn't show the two lower level claims working together as part of one reason.

 

 

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