The Science Of Scientific Writing Set 3 Set 3-Refining claims Claims Seven rules Exercises 1-6 Exercises 7-10 Final Page Set 3. |
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OVERVIEW: The way to well-written science
PART I: Paragraphs and Sentences SET A: Paragraphs: The Maps Behind Them SET B: Paragraphs: Using Maps to Meet Readers' Expectations SET C: Paragraphs with Something Extra: Points and Tails SET D: The Generic Section: Expectations and Maps as Blueprints SET E: Scientific Sections: The Methods and Results SET F: Scientific Sections: The Discussion SET G : Scientific Sections: The Introduction SET H : Sentences SET I : The Paper as a Whole
PART II: The Paper and its Sections SET 1: Argument Parts SET 2: Indicator Words SET 4: Locating Arguments in Prose SET 5: Rationale's Essay Planner SET 6: Evidence in Arguments: Basis Boxes Synthesis 1: Position-Early Paragraphs Synthesis 2: Position-Final Paragraphs Synthesis 3: Writing a Discussion I Synthesis 4: Writing a Discussion II |
'As' was a hint that 'they had talent' is a reason. We needed to say who 'they' are to make our claim box clear. The part of the sentence before the 'as' contains the position, but it isn't fully fleshed out, so we needed to rewrite this as a proper sentence.
Content of this page drawn in whole or part from the Austhink Rationale Exercises with permission from Austhink.
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