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OVERVIEW: The way to well-written science

How to do the Course

 

PART I: Paragraphs and Sentences

SET A: Paragraphs: The Maps Behind Them

SET B: Paragraphs: Using Maps to Meet Readers' Expectations

SET C: Paragraphs with Something Extra: Points and Tails

SET D: The Generic Section: Expectations and Maps as Blueprints

SET E: Scientific Sections: The Methods and Results

SET F: Scientific Sections: The Discussion

SET G : Scientific Sections: The Introduction

SET H : Sentences

SET I : The Paper as a Whole

 

 

PART II: The Paper and its Sections

Introduction

SET 1: Argument Parts

SET 2: Indicator Words

SET 3: Refining Claims

SET 4: Locating Arguments in Prose

SET 5: Rationale's Essay Planner

SET 6: Evidence in Arguments: Basis Boxes

SET 7: Assessing

SET 8: More on Assessing

SET 9: Analysis Maps

SET 10: Assessing Again

Synthesis 1: Position-Early Paragraphs

Synthesis 2: Position-Final Paragraphs

Synthesis 3: Writing a Discussion I

Synthesis 4: Writing a Discussion II

 

The essay steps the reader through the argument one branch at a time, working from the top of the branch to the bottom, before signaling the shift to examining another branch. Such an essay is highly over-explicit, but at least it is not confusing!

Here's a model answer:

Mobile phones should be banned in schools. There are two main reasons supporting this position, and the main objection to it can be rebutted.

The first reason is that mobile phones are disruptive in class since they often ring in class. The second reason to think that mobile phones should be banned in schools is that mobile phones can be used to cheat on tests. This is because students can text message other people without being noticed.

On the other hand, a consideration against the idea that mobile phones should be banned in schools is that some students need mobile phones. This objection is not convincing, however, because these students could have their communication needs met in other ways

Based on this reasoning it is clear that mobile phones should be banned in schools.

 

 

Content of this page drawn in whole or part from the Austhink Rationale Exercises with permission from Austhink.