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OVERVIEW: The way to well-written science

How to do the Course

 

PART I: Paragraphs and Sentences

SET A: Paragraphs: The Maps Behind Them

SET B: Paragraphs: Using Maps to Meet Readers' Expectations

SET C: Paragraphs with Something Extra: Points and Tails

SET D: The Generic Section: Expectations and Maps as Blueprints

SET E: Scientific Sections: The Methods and Results

SET F: Scientific Sections: The Discussion

SET G : Scientific Sections: The Introduction

SET H : Sentences

SET I : The Paper as a Whole

 

 

PART II: The Paper and its Sections

Introduction

SET 1: Argument Parts

SET 2: Indicator Words

SET 3: Refining Claims

SET 4: Locating Arguments in Prose

SET 5: Rationale's Essay Planner

SET 6: Evidence in Arguments: Basis Boxes

SET 7: Assessing

SET 8: More on Assessing

SET 9: Analysis Maps

SET 10: Assessing Again

Synthesis 1: Position-Early Paragraphs

Synthesis 2: Position-Final Paragraphs

Synthesis 3: Writing a Discussion I

Synthesis 4: Writing a Discussion II


Example

Let's put everything we've just learned together to write an essay based on this map:

Here's the model answer:

I believe that democracy is the best system of government.

My main reason depends on the claim that democracy reflects the will of the governed.  This claim should be accepted as it is true by definition.

My reason assumes that the best system of government is one that reflects the will of the governed.  This assumption could be challenged by the claim that the best system of government is one capable of taking necessary but unpopular steps.  I reject that objection, as democracy via a representative parliament can take such steps.  This is a good but weak rebuttal because representative parliaments can take unpopular steps in theory, but in practice elected representatives may not do so for fear of risking their future election prospects.

Since the challenge to the assumption fails, we should accept that my reason is a good one.  It provides only weak support for the position that democracy is the best system of government, as the complex matter of which system of government is best should be decided with reference to additional factors, e.g. whether it promotes fairness and justice.
Based on the argument considered, we should accept the conclusion that democracy is the best system of government.

Here's a step-by-step explanation of how we arrived at this essay.

 

 

Content of this page drawn in whole or part from the Austhink Rationale Exercises with permission from Austhink.