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OVERVIEW: The way to well-written science

How to do the Course

 

PART I: Paragraphs and Sentences

SET A: Paragraphs: The Maps Behind Them

SET B: Paragraphs: Using Maps to Meet Readers' Expectations

SET C: Paragraph Coherence and Cohesion

SET D: Sentences

SET E: Scientific Sections (including Methods)

SET F: Scientific Sections: The Discussion

SET G : Scientific Sections: The Introduction

SET H : The Paper as a Whole

Exercise 2

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Find a paper in a journal in your field whose Discussion section has the following characteristics:

  • It is short (12 paragraphs or less)
  • It belongs to an argumentative (i.e. hypothesis/model testing) paper, preferably focused on a single argument
  • It has a Frame of Reference paragraph

Paste in the text of the Discussion into the Scratchpad, making sure that the paragraph breaks are obvious, and either include the paper's URL or mail your instructor the paper.

(Alternatively, if you have a paper of your own to analyse, work with that, irrespective of its features)

Make up a section map for the Discussion, in which the boxes contain the Framing or Point Sentence of each paragraph. If you cannot detect such a sentence for any given paragraph, leave the box for that paragraph blank. (If you are working with one of your own papers, and it does not have a Frame of Reference paragraph, write up a section Framing Sentence suitable for such a paragraph.)

Read over the map: does it provide a coherent story? If not, revise the sentences in the boxes such that it does.

 

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